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I know painters paint it, composers play it, actors can act it...but what can writer's do?

Well, we can tell it in a story, we can convey it in a play, we can sing it in lyrics, and we can illustrate it in poems.

But, for the moment I am not a painter, a composer, an actor, or a writer...but I can explain it the only way I know how...

Love is:
Frustratingly magnificent while also terribly unique.
Confusing and intriguing, and can also leave you weak.
Menacingly wonderful if not also specially designed,
All emotions put together, but right now they are all mine.
Rivaling with a person whom I've never seen before,
knowing that no matter what; I will always love him more.
Daunting and perilous, but sweet and caring too,
A feeling of elation when it means so much to you.
A dance
A song
A rhythm in rhyme.
A feeling that can and will always transcend time.
The moment of that passing glance;
The crazy feeling of being lost in a trance....
The daydream of the soul's song,
The triumph and the elation, when other's think it's wrong.
The counterpoint,
the notes you sing
That one important idyllic dream.
That sickening feeling of despair.
As if you wonder why it was ever there.
The anger and the hate;
So overpowering it's hard to contemplate.
That moment of desire.
A stage in which your soul's on fire.
The pivotal turn.
The point in which your heart will burn.
The chance you have for your spirit to be sold.
Wanting only to have him to hold.
The night in which your conscious cries
Impossible tears that you despise.
That ache of knowing that he's not there,
A feeling that he can't be found anywhere.
Believing, that, with all your might.
Seeing him in your dreams that night.
Sometimes more than you could ever say,
certainly more than this little poem could every convey...
Love is....
Number two in the 100 Pieces of Writing Challenge...

*Dances* G'wa...just take a flying guess on who my muse was for this....

Yes...I was giddy...blame the extremely fluffy sequence I'm writing....
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pbjgame Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2007
funny...right after the introduction, the first poem is about "Love". Common topic, never worn out?
I like that you actually acknowledge the existance of disagreements and fights, with hope that they can be overcome. I pray that some day people learn how to work out their problems calmly, though.

Also (because your writing seems more serious than most) I would like your opinion on my newest poem "The Crimson Letter".
It's about The Scarlet Letter, adultery and bastard children (not derogatory "bastard", I mean in the literal sense of born out of wedlock) who have their parents fighting over them and can't live in hapiness in a family with all of the fighting, or those who are just disowned by their parents. Really common and tragic things in today's society. I hate adultery. *teen angst*, lol.
But, seriously...I may be whining but I do hate it.
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Keikou Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2006
And again, wow. Did one person find this and tell all their friends or something? I think you have more favorites on this than Michi and I have ever gotten on anything combined.
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Patches363 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
Wonderful piece of literature. Love really is the most difficult emotion to describe. If it can be done in words, then this is truly it. Awsome work. :thumbsup:
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lunchbox-sheep Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
I have never seen a better way to describe love. You got it right on. You write wondefully. I'm favoriting this.
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SweetSpades Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
I feel some strong emotion behind this, portrayed lovely with your pretty words :)
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X-Unit Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2006  Professional Filmographer
Ah- well your muse is easy to see- It's um... um... I have no idea- but this is also very nifty like the first.
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Keikou Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2006
Wow.... Eight favorites. That's more than I've ever gotten on anything.

^^ And I thought you said you were gonna put up the next chapter, before the second 100 challenges thing?

Poor little Marcy. *pets and hands you an Erik*
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Morikochan Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2006
...I was inspired....

*Snuggles Erik*

...and I am blown over by all of these COMMENTS! *Falls over*
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jmcosta Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2006
very well done, i really enjoyed it. My first fave on literature.
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Awesome! I love it!
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